So, I really didn’t like this story. I’d love to hear from others who have read it, but to me it just didn’t have any literary quality whatsoever.

The storytelling was exactly like a stream of consciousness. When my creative writing teachers ask us to sit down and write this is exactly the kind of thing that I write. I guess that’s the point of this story, but its annoying and could have probably been a much better story if it was set up more like a story.

That’s confusing, but hopefully it made sense. I definitely see why my professor assigned us this story and how it relates to the last story, but I still hated it.